Thursday, March 3, 2016

Writing Challenge: Root Words

I was a pedestrian walking down the street I Looked down at my feet and I realized I need a pedicure, the person said I Am a biped , I realized she was a expeditious. In the end I tried to sell my mixtape "you're hotter than my laptop". I knocked at a door he answered and said you're such a peddler

Wednesday, January 6, 2016

I'm going to live my life to the fullest and enjoy every part of it. I don't know I what i want to do career wise. I like thinking of new stuff so i'm like an inventory or an maneger of an inverter company but i don't really know what I want to do with my wild but precious life.

Monday, December 21, 2015

         Johnny…….Johnnnnny

“Pssst, JustIn you want to go Creamy Acres on Saturday”.  Shhh no talkIng durIng a test Divonni. “

“Why would I want to go to a closed barn ”, WhIspered JustIn “We're not goIng to  break Into the most scarIest Haunted house
ever”
“No talkIng In the class JustIn” yelled MIss WhItman .
“Sorry MIss WhItman”.  

Beeeeeep!
“If you dIdn’t fInIsh your test see me after school”.
“Bye MIss WhItman”
“Bye sugar plums”.
JustIn look It’s your crush. As she walked down the hallway wIth her mInIons she flIpped her perfect golden haIr all boys mouths dropped and followed her down the hall wIth there eyes. Her name was Taylor snowfIeld as she walked up JustIn started to word vomIt “you want to go to creamy acres wIth us”
She saId wIth her luscIous lIps “I don’t even, just eww” JustIn came back to realIty and realIzed what he was a nerd, geek, A bottom of the scale, A no class. He trIed to play It off and started to talk on hIs phone and yelled are you sure you want to go It’s gonna be very scare ok meet at the entrance on saturday Ok, Yes, Yeah, Bye.” WhIch was a really nIce save.
There was a crowd In the mIddle of the hallway and you could hear a chantIng whIch sounded l sunny sunny whIch was weIrd because It was a cloud day. But as we approached the cord we realIzed It was sayIng johnny johnny whIch Is the weIrdest kId In are school he has not spoken In two years he kInda specIal In the head.
“Hey JustIn let's get to lunch before the principal comes and gives everyone detention but to be honest I always have a feeling that kid johnny is staring at me with his dark cold eyes and frozen face but that's just me or him” hahaha!. We make It to our lunch table and we start callIng people over to ask them do they want to go If they don't they are told not to speak because If It gets out In the lunch everyone Is goIng to know even the cops so I manage to get fIve and a half people to go and there names are Taylor-we don't know yet, JustIn- He’s goIng to pee hImself,jack-What a nerd In for a scare, DIvonnI-The coolest nerd In cool,LokI- LIterally Low-Key I'm such a nerd , Jason-A tough nerd so we are goIng to meet after school we put our hand In and chan one two three NRED!, the lunch room gets quIet we all run out before they start bullyIng us.
We all except Taylor, But Taylor only know where and when were goIng so she could be stIll goIng, so we all go to the back of the school to meet and plot antIl nIght we were walkIng on a sIdewalk stIll plot and braInstormIng how and then we see johnny just standIng there In front of thIs old shack I went as a joke, up to johnny  I saId hey johnny Is thIs your house he nodded yes wIth hIs dead cold eyes wIth super dark bags looks lIke he hadn't been asleep In a long tIme, I hear a screech lIke a hIgh pItch noIse of a screen WhIch sound lIke a woman I thInk? Johnny turn around and turned back he looks at me. I don't what to say so I just word vomIt us nerds ussay do It often you.. want… to go to the house of mIrrors.. wI….th us. I Stopped and turned to my groups of frIend that were watchIng me knowIng what I saId . PuttIng there hand too there neck and shakIng whIch means lIke don't go there but I was goIng to say somethIng but he smIled, not In a joyful way but a creepy way he nodded and we all just felt a arrow go through our hearts we turn and run away.
We arrIve at the entrIes of House of mIrrors, “Hey everyone Its Taylor wIth excItement!”. She say I'm only here to check It out because I had nothIng to do today. I pull out my bIg paIrs of scIssors-FIskars, and I cut a hole through the fence we sneak In and the house a mIrror Is not the only attractIon there a bunch that run wIth electrIcIty so we have to turn on the electrIcIty so we splIt up Into groups to fInd the swItch and we hear a yell and then we It was comIng from taylor she dropped her phone and she couldn't fInd It twenty mInutes In and we hear another yell and It’s taylor agaIn she lost her rIng so It took ten mInutes for her and us to fInd her earrIng , see I'd rather brIng johnny than taylor because he at least he keep hIs stuff together.
AHHHHHH NO NO…. We all just Ignore that we let jason handle that because he's In her group. we start callIng her group but no answer so we ran backward In three steps whIch lead to the boys and gIrly bathroom blood was all over the wall. The wall read It’s Johnny. We all just sprInt for the exIt! But Someone was blockIng It, It was a cop he started to approach us and thank god It was a cop but the he stopped he dropped down on his knees and we saw what happened to him. There was a long sharp butchers knife

Monday, November 23, 2015


“Roxie” “Roxie!” “Roxie!!!” yes “wake up you're going to be late breakfast is going to be ready soon so get dressed please,did you clean your room again isn't this the  fourth time you cleaned your room this week” Mom I like it clean you know that” yeah yeah now hurry up and get dressed”. Do I have to Roxie said sarcastically, Roxie.
“Breakfast is ready dear” Coming!. “Knock Knock, Just wait a minute”.
“Roxie can you get the door please If I get the door i'm leaving mom”.
“No Wait you didn’t eat breakfast”. She opens the door.  

The walk to school was always a bore for Roxie she would walk the same route lonely, and she wouldn’t mind that she was alone she just didn’t want anymore attention than she gets in school. She was at the steps of the school she could smell all the stuff that she didn’t like that's why she doesn't like school like nail polish that the girls put to impress the boys and the body odor that the boys can’t take off “I wish they could take off”  . She Creeps into the school hoping nobody will notice her. She also comes at the last second so no one will be in the halls to see her.
The morning announcements came on hello students of Bottom High the PTA event dance is next week get you groove on while raising awareness for bullying- it cost five  dollars  all students in the hallway come to the office to get a late pass, And Roxie Park please report to the principal office. As she heard those words on the loud speaker she wasn't surprised when she heard a fuss from every classroom she whispered under her breath “ I'm coming”.
“Creak” She steps in very slowly think in her mind I wonder if he has a crave for blood then she has a habit of saying her thoughts out loud so yea  red chair A red desk, red shoes a black cape, gelled hair Mr.Hulk are you a vampire

“No Roxie you know why you're  here you have been missing school
lately and if you miss one more day your gonna have to be removed from school”
“Yeah Yeah”, Now can i get back to class i already have enough  on my shoulders I have the mean girls you know the movie on my tail, and by the way hows your daughter going
She doing fine actually she just got her first A+ on her quiz
Wait I forget what I don’t care “she runs out before he had time to take in the response  .              
She walking out going to her locker, “Ding Ding Ding” Yepi even more problems. all of a sudden students flooded the hallway. Hey “loser,freak,ugly,no one likes you” she already, Hello megan hows your day today.

“It just got worse because you came, Hey, um, lunch is next period and, um, I'm just wondering, like, where are you going to sit in, um, lunch.”

Roxie thought to herself “I hate it when she talks like that like um i'm um megan um and um I um stupid um”,

Megan continued “Because you don’t have no friends no friends equals no table at lunch just to um do the math for you. everyone knows you're special in the brain”.

Well bye Roxie I’ll see you at lunch or not “ HAR HAR HAR”.

Yeah I think i'm going to go outside and sit on the musty old bench that no one sit there .

When I walked into the lunchroom it was so silence you could hear a pin drop. when I walked in then the bad words came and words I didn’t even know.
I walked into line and people just had the nerve to cut in front of me, My ears were getting hot but I didn’t really care I got in line as the Fifth person and now i'm the eleventh.
Finally I got to the lunch lady she said “what do you want” I said mash potatoes please she with anxiety so she gets out of here quickly before they notice her she finally get to the checkout line after all the cutting she get there and turn around and she sweared she could see and hear everybody heartbeat  and it kept get louder and louder. Then she saw food flew into the air and landed like cluster  ikt landed on her she open her mouth as the heart beat went away all she could hair was laughter “HAR HAR HAR” she run out dropping her dish and ran to the bathroom she saw a girl in the a stall she said  hello “she heard a recoil noise it sound like something hurled she


Sunday, November 22, 2015

No one is Perfect

“Roxie” “Roxie!” “Roxie!!!” yes “wake up you're going to be late breakfast is going to be ready soon so get dressed please,did  you clean your room again isn't this the  fourth time you cleaned your room this week” Mom I like it clean you know that” yeah yeah now hurry up and get dressed”. Do I have to Roxie said sarcastically, Roxie.
“Breakfast is ready dear” Coming!. “Knock Knock, Just wait a minute”.
“Roxie can you get the door please If I get the door i'm leaving mom”.
“No Wait you didn’t eat breakfast”.  She opens the door.  

The walk to school was always a bore for Roxie she would walk the same route lonely, and she wouldn’t mind that she was alone she just didn’t want anymore attention than she gets in school. She was at the steps of the school she could smell all the stuff that she didn’t like that's why she doesn't like school like nail polish that the girls put to impress the boys and the body odor that the boys can’t take off “I wish they could take off”  . She Creeps into the school hoping nobody will notice her. She also comes at the last second so no one will be in the halls to see her.
The morning announcements came on hello students of Bottom High the PTA event dance is next week get you groove on while raising awareness for bullying- it cost five  dollars  all students in the hallway come to the office to get a late pass, And Roxie Park please report to the principal office. As she heard those words on the loud speaker she wasn't surprised when she heard a fuss from every classroom she whispered under her breath “ I'm coming”.
“Creak” She steps in very slowly think in her mind I wonder if he has a crave for blood then she has a habit of saying her thoughts out loud so yea  red chair A red desk, red shoes a black cape, gelled hair Mr.Hulk are you a vampire

“No Roxie you know why you're  here you have been missing school
lately and if you miss one more day your gonna have to be removed from school”
“Yeah Yeah”, Now can i get back to class i already have enough  on my shoulders I have the mean girls you know the movie on my tail, and by the way hows your daughter going
She doing fine actually she just got her first A+ on her quiz
Wait I forget what I don’t care “she runs out before he had time to take in the response  .              
She walking out going to her locker, “Ding Ding Ding” Yepi even more problems. all of a sudden students flooded the hallway. Hey “loser,freak,ugly,no one likes you” she already, Hello megan hows your day today.

“It just got worse because you came, Hey, um, lunch is next period and, um, I'm just wondering, like, where are you going to sit in, um, lunch.”

Roxie thought to herself “I hate it when she talks like that like um i'm um megan um and rRRum I um stupid um”,

Megan continued “Because you don’t have no friends no friends equals no table at lunch just to um do the math for you. everyone knows you're special in the brain”.

Well bye Roxie I’ll see you at lunch or not “ HAR HAR HAR”.

Yeah I think i'm going to go outside and sit on the musty old bench that no one sit there .

When I walked into the lunchroom it was so silence you could hear a pin drop. when I walked in then the bad words came and words I didn’t even know.
I walked into line and people just had the nerve to cut in front of me, My ears were getting hot but I didn’t really care I got in line as the Fifth person and now i'm the eleventh.

Finally I got to the lunch lady she said “what do you want” I said mash potatoes please she with anxiety so she gets out of here quickly before they notice her she finally get to the checkout line after all the cutting she get there and turn around and she sweared she could see and hear everybody heartbeat  and it kept get louder and louder. Then she saw food flew into the air and landed like cluster  ikt landed on her she open her mouth as the heart beat went away all she could hair was laughter “HAR HAR HAR” she run out dropping her dish and ran to the bathroom she saw a girl in the a stall she said  hello “she heard a recoil noise it sound like something hurled   

Thursday, October 8, 2015

Summary and Scene in my book by Divonni Grange

I am reading The Fat Vampire and where going to see how it has scene or summary. My first example is on pg.14 and it's a summary it's when "Jay blushed the color of raw meat Doug had to look away an awkward moment passed between them like a cripple". that was a summary and if the author wanted to make a scene he could add more detailed it was like a moment then gone. here is a example of a good scene and way it's not a summary on pg.16 ." Doug stared at the cave. A light breeze tickled his skin and made him shiver-a by-product of being so low on blood, he thought after feeding he could barley feel temperature at all suddenly his ears prick up at an unexpected sound". That was a scene because it had way more detailed lines and and that paragraph was supposed to put you on edge like "something was going to happen next" that's what I thought . When they said Doug ears pricked up it like a spidery sense for vampire to alert you or foreshadowing that something going to happen.